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A fortress of stone,
Shadows and hate.
A black iron throne,
bound to its fate.

Little black roses,
drowning out light.
The threat that it poses,
amplified by night.

Ghostly voices are wailing,
the air smells of death.
Outside it is hailing,
Struck by winters' cold breath.

No hope for salvation,
for such a wicked soul.
Burdened with eternal damnation,
nothing left but a hole.

Master of it all,
heartless and proud.
Chained to the wall,
strengthening the shroud.

Calling the storms,
to set all ablaze.
For he noone mourns,
alone for all his days.
©2005-2009 ~CoolKatSlim
:iconcoolkatslim:

Author's Comments

Wasn't feeling too keen with some situations at work. So I sat and wrote what popped into my head...Its not even much, but took me 3 hours to write >.<

My rythem sucks. I know.

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:iconlifesucks666:
What happened?!!!

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"300 million sperm and THAT'S the one that got through!!!"
:iconchibipunk7231:
O_O omg, that was so cool, it gave my imagination a moring boost, i liked it i'm gonna +fav it! ^_^
:iconxskirtzx:
hey hey! I like it a lot! Your rhymes are good!! :dance:

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>>>Honk if you love Poke'mon<<<
:iconcoolkatslim:
People suck. Thats what happened. *Nods*

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Why must I be tormented? My Jewel is broken, shattered to bits...I care not to fix it.
Gefährlich ist wer Schmerzen kennt
vom Feuer das den Geist verbre
:iconcoolkatslim:
Thank ye much >^.^<

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Why must I be tormented? My Jewel is broken, shattered to bits...I care not to fix it.
Gefährlich ist wer Schmerzen kennt
vom Feuer das den Geist verbre
:iconcoolkatslim:
Thankies! >^.^<

I guess the rhymes started out well enough, but I think they kinda died out at the end.

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Why must I be tormented? My Jewel is broken, shattered to bits...I care not to fix it.
Gefährlich ist wer Schmerzen kennt
vom Feuer das den Geist verbre
:iconnekogurl2087:
very VERY nice!
i really like the rythem to it. i really... OMG! i can't decribe how much i like it! ^^
:glomp:

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'behold! the only dog in the world to say "meow", instead of "bark"~!'
~ i do tricks too, but only if you rub my tummy first!~
:iconcoolkatslim:
:blowkiss::glomp: Thank you! >^.^<

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Why must I be tormented? My Jewel is broken, shattered to bits...I care not to fix it.
Gefährlich ist wer Schmerzen kennt
vom Feuer das den Geist verbre
:iconwhitecobra999:
Your excellent word choice makes up for anything to do with rhythms :P
Very nice! :heart:

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